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Marco
Posted: July 13, 20122012-07-13T10:15:56+10:00 2012-07-13T10:15:56+10:00In: Public

a retired war man in a mental hospital, attacks the nurse while he hallucinates he still in the battlefield.

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    1. [Deleted User]
      2012-07-13T10:57:46+10:00Added an answer on July 13, 2012 at 10:57 am

      We have had a similar type of logline here on the site before. This is really more the description of a single scene rather than the promise of a full story.

      Is this for a short or feature film?

      Have a read of the tips on this site, it will help you in shaping a sentence that does a better job of selling your story. Good luck!

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    2. djmc
      2012-07-13T13:06:10+10:00Added an answer on July 13, 2012 at 1:06 pm

      Yeah, this sounds like an interesting premise(for a short or something) but doesn’t sound like a movie without additional information.

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    3. Marco
      2012-07-13T14:40:59+10:00Added an answer on July 13, 2012 at 2:40 pm

      yeaph thanks , it is for a short film!!!

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