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Alan SmitheePenpusher
Posted: June 28, 20202020-06-28T13:48:49+10:00 2020-06-28T13:48:49+10:00In: TVPOD

A ruthless, power hungry politician must backstab, manipulate and kill those that oppose him to become the most powerful man in America

A ruthless, power hungry politician must backstab, manipulate and kill those that oppose him to become the most powerful man in America
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    1. dpg Singularity
      2020-06-28T23:09:09+10:00Added an answer on June 28, 2020 at 11:09 pm

      If “become the most powerful man in America” means he becomes President, then just say so, and save 6 words.

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    2. Richiev Singularity
      2020-06-28T14:53:10+10:00Added an answer on June 28, 2020 at 2:53 pm

      Pretty solid

      I could tell the show from the logline, You could probably drop the word ruthless because backstab, manipulate, and kill are all more descriptive of what it means to be ruthless.

      However a great example logline.

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    3. CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
      2020-07-02T13:06:25+10:00Added an answer on July 2, 2020 at 1:06 pm

      This needs a “but” otherwise it becomes a series of episodes.

      During his run for the White House ruthless politician betrays, manipulates and even murders to get what he needs but…. causing…

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