A self-made businesswoman risks bankruptcy to complete her biggest real estate project, but everything depends on her persuading a single holdout–an eccentric maker of wind chimes–to sell his land.
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A self-made businesswoman risks bankruptcy to complete her biggest real estate project, but everything depends on her persuading a single holdout–an eccentric maker of wind chimes–to sell his land.
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Do they fall in love?
I don’t find any salient fault with the logline. But neither do I find any salient feature. A unique take, an interesting twist such as what SSalvatore asked about, the adversaries fall in love. Or it pits the woman against her own father.
The logline describes the steak — but it doesn’t have any sizzle. And loglines are more about selling the sizzle than describing the steak.
Yes, could use some romantic tension, immediate thought “real estate mogul has finally met her match when a handsome eccentric lone holdout refuses to sell” something like that.