A self-made businesswoman risks bankruptcy to complete her biggest real estate project, but everything depends on her persuading a single holdout–an eccentric maker of wind chimes–to sell his land.
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A self-made businesswoman risks bankruptcy to complete her biggest real estate project, but everything depends on her persuading a single holdout–an eccentric maker of wind chimes–to sell his land.
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Yes, could use some romantic tension, immediate thought “real estate mogul has finally met her match when a handsome eccentric lone holdout refuses to sell” something like that.
I don’t find any salient fault with the logline. But neither do I find any salient feature. A unique take, an interesting twist such as what SSalvatore asked about, the adversaries fall in love. Or it pits the woman against her own father.
The logline describes the steak — but it doesn’t have any sizzle. And loglines are more about selling the sizzle than describing the steak.
Do they fall in love?