Posted: 2014-07-24T06:33:29+10:00 In:

A shy young girl wants to tell the real cause of her a friend's death because she was always bothered by her in her dreams but she is afraid that she might be accused of being a part of the crime and so she started to stalk her suspected killer only to realize that the death was self inflicted.

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    1. Singularity

      >>> only to realize that the death was self inflicted

      The logline seems to be a spoiler, giving away how the story ends. A logline should indicate where a story is going — but not how it ends.

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    2. Singularity

      >>> only to realize that the death was self inflicted

      The logline seems to be a spoiler, giving away how the story ends. A logline should indicate where a story is going — but not how it ends.

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    3. It is really wordy. If it is not vital to the story you don’t need it in the log line. A shy girl risks her own innocence by stalking her best friend’s killer only to discover a horrifying truth.

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    4. It is really wordy. If it is not vital to the story you don’t need it in the log line. A shy girl risks her own innocence by stalking her best friend’s killer only to discover a horrifying truth.

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