Penpusher
Posted: 2018-09-22T15:05:42+10:00 In:

A simple disagreement in a gas station results in a store manager being brutally murdered. A dubious employee can’t accept the official explanation and asks one too many questions, sparking a series of events that could ruin him completely.

A simple disagreement in a gas station results in a store manager being brutally murdered. A dubious employee can’t accept the official explanation and asks one too many questions, sparking a series of events that could ruin him completely.
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    1. Best Answer
      Singularity

      Who all?

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    2. Best Answer
      Singularity

      >>>sparking a series of events that could ruin him completely.

      So, what does he do about it?? And what does “ruin” entail?? Is his life in mortal jeopardy?

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    3. Best Answer
      Samurai

      What’s the “official explanation?”

      Try something like:
      When her boss gets brutally murdered, a gas station clerk must …?

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    4. Best Answer
      Singularity

      Love your user name by the way…

      This is too long and lacks detail. Why is the employee so adamant to find the killer? Is the employee a family member? What makes the murder personal for him? What’s the end game for the employee? What MUST he achieve, or die trying, by the end of the story?

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