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kay_writesPenpusher
Posted: March 23, 20172017-03-23T21:52:50+10:00 2017-03-23T21:52:50+10:00In: Drama

A simple ordinary man loses all hope from life after being falsely accused of domestic violence by his dominant wife. He is also on the verge of losing custody of his girl child, the only love of his life. He turns to his schoolfriend who has always been rebellious and cool, and who is a motivational writer and a mini celebrity by now, for advice. In the process, he learns about his friend?s own dark secrets which makes him the indifferent, sex-addicted man that he is today. Men have issues too. Will you care to ask ? For once?

A simple ordinary man loses all hope from life after being falsely accused of domestic violence by his dominant wife. He is also on the verge of losing custody of his girl child, the only love of his life. He turns to his schoolfriend who has always been rebellious and cool, and who is a motivational writer and a mini celebrity by now, for advice. In the process, he learns about his friend?s own dark secrets which makes him the indifferent, sex-addicted man that he is today. Men have issues too. Will you care to ask ? For once?
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    1. Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
      2017-03-24T00:57:36+10:00Added an answer on March 24, 2017 at 12:57 am

      At this length and at this structure, this is more like a quick pitch or elevator pitch.

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    2. dpg Singularity
      2017-03-23T22:34:58+10:00Added an answer on March 23, 2017 at 10:34 pm

      At 99 words this is way too long?fora logline.

      Per Aristotle’s “Poetics” a logline should define a unity of action, a singular course of action. ?What is the singular action that ?the protagonist takes and that drives the story? ?As a result of all his misfortunes, what becomes his over arching objective goal?

      Please consult the guidelines under “Formula” at the top of the page for guidelines on how to formulate and industry acceptable logline.

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