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Posted: July 13, 20122012-07-13T05:34:23+10:00 2012-07-13T05:34:23+10:00In: Public

A slacker guardian angel has three days to get his human assignment to fall in love, or the angel will spend eternity in hell.

Comedy. Feature length spec.

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    1. sharkeatingman
      2012-07-13T06:02:39+10:00Added an answer on July 13, 2012 at 6:02 am

      I think this is very good as is! Whomever taught you loglines (me?…jk!) did a good job!

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    2. 2012-07-13T07:16:26+10:00Added an answer on July 13, 2012 at 7:16 am

      Love the logline/love the premise

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    3. 2012-07-13T10:10:52+10:00Added an answer on July 13, 2012 at 10:10 am

      Thanks! I’m a good writer too but can’t sell sh*t.

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    4. fejumas
      2012-07-13T10:55:50+10:00Added an answer on July 13, 2012 at 10:55 am

      Pretty good logline – it has goal, stakes, urgency. Nice job! Personally, I would maybe like a hint if the angel has to make his human fall in love with anyone specific or just in general.

      Have you seen A Life Less Ordinary? This reminds me a little of it. Might be worth checking it out.

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