[Working Title] How to Eat Life
I am seeking criticism of this logline so i can learn how to do logline’s better
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Consider the following:
Formula: A [CHARACTER], must [do the ACTION/GOAL] when [a MAJOR EVENT occurs].
Example:
“A simple village boy embarks on a [show don’t tell “series of challenges” that lead to a goal] with an enigmatic dragon when [a sadistic entity causes a MAJOR EVENT]”
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