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naomi?Penpusher
Posted: August 25, 20182018-08-25T00:13:16+10:00 2018-08-25T00:13:16+10:00In: Crime

a sorrowing widower managed to kidnap a kid by giving away free ice cream after 10 years of his daughter?s death

a sorrowing widower managed to kidnap a kid by giving away free ice cream after 10 years of his daughter?s death
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    1. henb Samurai
      2019-05-31T23:24:17+10:00Added an answer on May 31, 2019 at 11:24 pm

      lol This one made me laugh, I don’t think that’s your intention though. Just because the initial description of the man makes him sound like a nice, old-man, then you have that he gives kids ice cream for free all in order to steal one of them. I do like this aspect in your logline, except it needs to be made more sinister, to help make clear this is in the crime genre.

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