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Posted: 2019-02-26T07:35:09+10:00 In:

A space alien and her Paiute Indian female friend cause a day that Las Vegas stood still, thus alarming the earth leaders into disassembling all nuclear weapons.

A space alien and her Paiute Indian female friend cause a day that Las Vegas stood still, thus alarming the earth leaders into disassembling all nuclear weapons.
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      Singularity

      What is the lead character’s goal?
      What is standing in her way?

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      Singularity

      I think the majority of my points from your alternative version of this logline still stand.

      This one makes less sense though. So Las Vegas stood still for a day and completely unprompted mankind thinks the logical next step is to disassemble all nuclear weapons. Independence Day is a great example of what mankind will do with nuclear weapons when aliens appear and mess with us. Or Aliens (nuke the site from orbit). Mankind loves to fight and we have a long and bloody history to prove it. Aliens appearing isn’t going to change that – particularly when there’s no reason for it.

      Hope this helps.

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