MindfullNess
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A stressed out business exec takes up meditation for relief, only to have visions of his employees miserable lives should his failing business go under
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This seems like just the inciting incident to me, what is he going to do about it? What’s his goal?
When his stress-relieving meditation gives him premonitions of his employees’ miserable lives should his business fail, a XXXXX XXXXX must…
He’s doing something to combat stress = he’s stressed
They’re his employees and it’s his business = business exec
This leaves plenty of scope to describe the main character in a new way so we get even more information about who he is.
Hope this helps.