A subdued house wife’s life is turned upside down when 2 violent criminals wreak havoc in her small town, leading to the death of her husband. She has to fight for justice, and fight to get her life back. But is she really the innocent victim?
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A subdued house wife’s life is turned upside down when 2 violent criminals wreak havoc in her small town, leading to the death of her husband. She has to fight for justice, and fight to get her life back. But is she really the innocent victim?
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No need for questions at the end of a logline, they often work against its purpose.
“A subdued house wife?s life is turned upside down when 2 violent criminals wreak havoc in her small town, leading to the death of her husband.”
Is a long way of saying:
After a violent criminal kills her husband…
Best to employ economy in loglines, as the brevity of a logline is indicative professionalism.
What is the house wife’s goal? What exactly does she want?
It could be to put the killers in jail for example, what ever it is mention it specifically as “…get her life back…” is to vague a goal for a logline.