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Posted: February 2, 20162016-02-02T13:38:55+10:00 2016-02-02T13:38:55+10:00In: Crime

A successful man feels he?s got everything, but his life goal is to win the Olympic Games in 2016. He competes in swimming freestyle. He won?t win a single race in first place until he discovers steroids. He embraces the drug and takes the 1st place. But his conscience won?t let him live in peace. After 3 months, he is demanded for having injected the drug in order to win the race.

A successful man feels he?s got everything, but his life goal is to win the Olympic Games in 2016. He competes in swimming freestyle. He won?t win a single race in first place until he discovers steroids. He embraces the drug and takes the 1st place. But his conscience won?t let him live in peace. After 3 months, he is demanded for having injected the drug in order to win the race.
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    1. dpg Singularity
      2016-02-03T01:04:23+10:00Added an answer on February 3, 2016 at 1:04 am

      The logline seems to give away the ending?, something a logline should never do.? And what does “demanded” mean?? Does he lose his victory medal because he got caught in a post-race drug test or because he voluntarily confessed to taking steroids?

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