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Alan SmitheePenpusher
Posted: April 30, 20192019-04-30T20:33:43+10:00 2019-04-30T20:33:43+10:00In: Fantasy

A sulky Teenager from a Forest tribe is magically transported to a Medieval society populated with mythical creatures after she accidentally breaks a sacred statue. She must find the Infamous Witch in order to fix the statue before sunset or transform into a spirit creature forever.

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      Richiev Singularity
      2019-05-01T07:55:30+10:00Added an answer on May 1, 2019 at 7:55 am

      The story is coming together, it is unique enough to stand on its own but you could use ‘The Wizard of Oz’ as a template. This is a good thing (Same but different sells in Hollywood)

      As for the logline, is the lead character still a caveman (woman) as in previous versions of the story or is the ‘forest tribe’ something different now?

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