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Sam Garner
Posted: June 27, 20142014-06-27T08:58:19+10:00 2014-06-27T08:58:19+10:00In: Public

A teenager's life is thrown into chaos when he falls in love with a girl and realises that he must face his past and himself in order to be with her.

Moonless Night

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    1. beezeebee Penpusher
      2021-08-29T20:54:30+10:00Added an answer on August 29, 2021 at 8:54 pm

      Hi Sam. The Logline sounds a bit vague to me. I would like to get a better idea is to who the protagonist is apart form just being a teenager and where the main conflict specifically comes from other than facing his past. Reads more like a movie tagline than a logline. From what logline it doesn’t very much sound like it’s something we haven’t seen dozens of times before, so an original twist on it could really go a long way here I think.

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