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JdkernerPenpusher
Posted: November 8, 20202020-11-08T15:49:46+10:00 2020-11-08T15:49:46+10:00In: Horror

A ten year-old hearing and speech-impaired boy evolves from prey to predator in a battle against a group of masked killers savaging homeowners on Halloween.

Deaf, mute Billy finds his parents brutally murdered on Halloween.  In his effort to get help he discovers a band of masked killers systematically targeting homeowners; after evading one killer  he regroups and foils several attacks.  The killers’ clever escape plan succeeds, but Billy stubbornly persists and forces a showdown that leads to their eventual capture.

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    1. Odie Samurai
      2020-11-10T04:26:51+10:00Added an answer on November 10, 2020 at 4:26 am

      I like this, the logline could be tightened up though. Also, for the logline, ensure the killer’s focus is ON this boy’s house – not the ambiguous people on his block.
      Leaning towards:
      “A deaf-mute boy must evolve from prey to predator when a group of masked killers invades his home on Halloween”

      Hope this helps, take care.

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