Logliner
Posted: 2015-12-06T16:23:26+10:00 In:

A ‘Thrill-Thirsty’ son learns that ‘Knowledge is a double-edged sword’ and promises to wield it wisely, after crossing roads with his Inspiring-Mentor, his Dad (a celebrated Police-Officer!).

A ‘Thrill-Thirsty’ son learns that ‘Knowledge is a double-edged sword’ and promises to wield it wisely, after crossing roads with his Inspiring-Mentor, his Dad (a celebrated Police-Officer!).
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    1. Best Answer
      Logliner

      Ok, now tell me in half as many words.

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    2. Best Answer
      Logliner

      Thank You… made a lotta sense…!

      Here i go again:

      A ?Thrill-Thirsty? son learns that ?Knowledge is a double-edged sword? and promises to wield it wisely, after crossing roads with his Inspiring-Mentor, his Dad (a Retiring-Celebrated Police-Officer!). But he is on the ‘Other-Side’ of the Law already. The Dad is not sure whom he must protect. The LAW of the Corrupt-Politicians or his SON who has taken their bait!?

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      Singularity

      Yep, more details are needed about the plot. ?What is the protagonist’s objective goal? Who is the antagonist that stands in his way or who must he overcome? ?What are the stakes?

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    4. Best Answer
      Logliner

      i think we need a lit bit more of the external plot in the logline. ?Here it just sounds like an introspective journey…who is the enemy he will have to face to wield this knowledge in order to win?

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