A toxic marriage, an unsuspecting kid who bears its brunt, and the morally-upright headmistress of the school he studies in, find fortuitous redemption through an unsettling incident ? his suicide.
Adarsh DoraPenpusher
A toxic marriage, an unsuspecting kid who bears its brunt, and the morally-upright headmistress of the school he studies in, find fortuitous redemption through an unsettling incident ? his suicide.
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This is a marketing line and a good one. But it doesn?t tell how the story will show this.
After a student suicide a principal and the father go on a road trip.
A student kills himself and his family and his school principal open a not for profit but are attacked for being the cause of the suicide.
These are stories. May not be good, but we have detail. Give us some details, thanks.
It’s not clear if this is a feature, short or series. What are you intending to develop?
Also, it’s best to get your head around what a logline is and how it functions – a brief description of the major plot points in a story for tired and over worked executives.
Try and use this as a template for future versions: A significant event motivates a flawed main character to take action in pursuit of a goal.
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