A toxic marriage, an unsuspecting kid who bears its brunt, and the morally-upright headmistress of the school he studies in, find fortuitous redemption through an unsettling incident ? his suicide.
Adarsh DoraPenpusher
A toxic marriage, an unsuspecting kid who bears its brunt, and the morally-upright headmistress of the school he studies in, find fortuitous redemption through an unsettling incident ? his suicide.
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It’s not clear if this is a feature, short or series. What are you intending to develop?
Also, it’s best to get your head around what a logline is and how it functions – a brief description of the major plot points in a story for tired and over worked executives.
Try and use this as a template for future versions: A significant event motivates a flawed main character to take action in pursuit of a goal.
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This is a marketing line and a good one. But it doesn?t tell how the story will show this.
After a student suicide a principal and the father go on a road trip.
A student kills himself and his family and his school principal open a not for profit but are attacked for being the cause of the suicide.
These are stories. May not be good, but we have detail. Give us some details, thanks.