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Alice Has Glass Eyes
Posted: August 31, 20122012-08-31T00:11:07+10:00 2012-08-31T00:11:07+10:00In: Public

A well-dressed fashion mannequin desperately wants to build a real life of friends, family, work and love – but his true nature is catastrophically revealed during a date with the woman of his dreams.

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    1. Maidenscombe
      2012-09-02T11:13:49+10:00Added an answer on September 2, 2012 at 11:13 am

      Have you used the word mannequin figuratively or literally?

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    2. 2012-09-02T14:25:46+10:00Added an answer on September 2, 2012 at 2:25 pm

      Sorry, I think that could’ve been clearer. The protagonist is literally an animated storefront mannequin.

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    3. Maidenscombe
      2012-09-02T21:28:43+10:00Added an answer on September 2, 2012 at 9:28 pm

      Oh bugger, I didn’t realise the mannequin was animated. I looked at what you’d written for ages, but it didn’t move. Just describing it as a fashional mannequin should be enough, then putting that it wants a life of real friends.
      About the woman of the mannequins dreams? Is it a real person or a mannequin

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    4. Screenwriters Anonymous
      2012-09-02T22:05:00+10:00Added an answer on September 2, 2012 at 10:05 pm

      I like it, but perhaps this would work better?

      “A fashion mannequin’s dream comes true when he comes to life, but is short lived when he falls for the love of his life.”

      Who is the woman? The mannequin’s dresser? A clerk? A shopper? A random passer-by when on her way to work? That may help specify the logline a bit more … I’m looking forward to learning more!

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