Penpusher
Posted: 2012-08-23T18:04:46+10:00 In:

A who woman seeks help is murdered. Driven by a sense of moral obligation Kaameleon breaks a promise and returns to prison. Beaten, starved, terrorized and humiliated. Can he survive the sadistic guard targeting him to find what happened to five missing inmates? Kaameleon?s personality is the driving force keeping his people working to insure his survival.

The Giorgioni Affair

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    4 Reviews

    1. This logline is all over the place. Don’t try to tell the whole story in the logline. Give us the protagonist, tell us something about him or her, give us his or her goal and the main obstacle to that goal. Include a twist that makes it different from what we’ve seen before. Try to put it all in one sentence. That’s it.

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    2. Penpusher

      Thanks.

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    3. I concur with CraigBerger. Although my sense of an effective logline is to be able to introduce the nain protagonist and what’s at stake in one or two lines.

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    4. Logliner

      Carang, check out our suggestions on how to write a logline here: https://loglines.org/howto.

      Then try to do it in one sentence.

      And avoid typos. It doesn’t look good when your second words shouldn’t be there…

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