Penpusher
Posted: 2021-10-10T01:27:30+10:00 In:

A young extraordinary adventurer lead his friends on misadventures and learn life lessons along the way.

A young extraordinary adventurer lead his friends on misadventures and learn life lessons along the way.
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    1. Penpusher

      Right now it’s far too general.It sounds potentially interesting, but I’m left wanting to know what kind of adventurer he is, what kind of misadventures the friends go on, and what kind of life lessons they learn.

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    2. Penpusher

      I think we need more here. I’m not compelled just yet. What is the misadventure, what are the stakes, and what can go wrong? Also, is there a word you could find that could combine young & adventurer? Or you could implant “young” in another way? For example, “An amateur (or aspiring) adventurer leads a group of teens…” Sounds kind of like a Goonies-style coming-of-age adventure but right now I’m taking liberties in surmising that.

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