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Posted: May 24, 20172017-05-24T17:43:30+10:00 2017-05-24T17:43:30+10:00In: Drama

A young girl, obsessed with designing a robot that will replace her dead mother, learns that she has been chosen to compete at an International Robotics Meet, in the first all girls team. But when her grandmother is diagnosed with Alzheimers she must choose between the obligations of her traditional Sri Lankan family and her own dreams.

A young girl, obsessed with designing a robot that will replace her dead mother, learns that she has been chosen to compete at an International Robotics Meet, in the first all girls team. But when her grandmother is diagnosed with Alzheimers she must choose between the obligations of her traditional Sri Lankan family and her own dreams.
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    1. henb Samurai
      2019-08-31T23:53:39+10:00Added an answer on August 31, 2019 at 11:53 pm

      This concept is great, though your logline is much too long. Here’s an example of how you could shorten it: ‘Accepted into a competition testing her engineering prowess, a young girl must decide whether or not to abandon her team and put aside her obsession of creating a replacement mother for herself, after her grandmother falls ill.’

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