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Posted: September 8, 20192019-09-08T04:55:38+10:00 2019-09-08T04:55:38+10:00In: Drama

  A young girl overcomes obstacles in her life to become the first native African to win Miss World.

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    1. dpg Singularity
      2019-09-08T05:39:00+10:00Added an answer on September 8, 2019 at 5:39 am

      Is this a biopic of Agbani Darego of Nigeria, the first native African to win the Miss World pageant (2001)?? If so, since it’s a story based upon a real person, real events, it’s okay to name the character in the logline.??

      Also, the logline would benefit from being more specific as to the obstacles she had to overcome to win the contest.? In other words, what differentiates her struggle to win the contest from the struggle of all other women who have competed for the title for the years?

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      2019-09-08T12:52:21+10:00Added an answer on September 8, 2019 at 12:52 pm

      It would help if there was a specific obstacle she must overcome.

      What is the main conflict?

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