A young man in the quaint town of Ravens Circle must confront his deepest fears to uncover the eerie secrets that bind him to the malevolent force terrorizing his community before it consumes everything he holds dear.

Has potential, but is currently too vague. We need specificity in loglines. He must confront his deepest fears – what are they? Is this set in our world or a fantasy world? What time period? What is the malevolent force and how is it terrorising his community? Without specificity, we can’t visualise the story and the logline has no impact.