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IvyEight6Penpusher
Posted: September 2, 20202020-09-02T05:48:27+10:00 2020-09-02T05:48:27+10:00In: Action

After his wife was murdered, a police officer must hold the bikers responsible with the help of his daughter who is a cyborg.

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    1. IvyEight6 Penpusher
      2020-09-02T10:56:50+10:00Added an answer on September 2, 2020 at 10:56 am

      1) It’s set in the near future.
      2) He is a drug addict. He does. His daughter built after she got in a car accident.
      3) She was sexually assaulted. They covered it up and put her underwater.

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      • Odie Samurai
        2020-09-02T16:46:03+10:00Replied to answer on September 2, 2020 at 4:46 pm

        Thanks for the elaboration, this is what I was able to glean.

        “Set in a dystopic future, a drug-addled policeman and his cyborg daughter exact revenge on the biker gang that covered up the brutal murder of his wife”

        The story sounds b a d a s s 😉 take care.

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    2. Odie Samurai
      2020-09-02T09:40:16+10:00Added an answer on September 2, 2020 at 9:40 am

      Interesting, getting a RoboCops Daughter vibe.

      You need a clearer connection to this cyborg thang, that hit me out of leftfield. I can “see” this guy’s wife getting murdered and instead of going for his gun, he reluctantly turns on a killing machine – his cyborg daughter and says Sic ‘em! lol.

      A couple of questions, please.
      1. Where is this set, in the near future?
      3. Who is this police officer? Does he have access to cyborg tech? looking for how his daughter was built/modified.
      4. If HE has to hold them responsible, there must have been a miss in the justice system? How did the bikers escape justice?

      Take care.

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