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kbfilmworksSamurai
Posted: May 29, 20182018-05-29T06:27:04+10:00 2018-05-29T06:27:04+10:00In: Thriller

A young married couple who jointly own a biotechnology startup find themselves in grave danger when a multinational company uses espionage tactics to turn them against each other as part of a plot to disgrace and ruin them in order to suppress an invention that will save millions of lives.

A young married couple who jointly own a biotechnology startup find themselves in grave danger when a multinational company uses espionage tactics to turn them against each other as part of a plot to disgrace and ruin them in order to suppress an invention that will save millions of lives.
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    1. variable Uberwriter
      2018-05-29T07:13:40+10:00Added an answer on May 29, 2018 at 7:13 am

      It tells us Objective of the Antagonist rather than the Protagonist (also which of them is driving the plot?)

      After becoming target to this hostile multinational, what becomes their GOAL?

      That they are young, & ‘how’ their adversary plans to break them apart, seems redundant at this stage

      It is also unclear how disgracing them can suppress this rare invention

      Good Luck kbfilmworks

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    2. TullyArcher Samurai
      2018-06-28T03:29:32+10:00Added an answer on June 28, 2018 at 3:29 am

      So their goal is to not be pulled apart? Is the action of the film couple’s therapy? I’m being sarcastic I know but you didn’t actually tell us much about what they’ll need to DO.

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