Penpusher
Posted: 2017-08-08T19:26:20+10:00 In:

A young party girl finds herself lost in the woods and is confronted by a hoody who wants to frighten her with stories of the Suicide Forest.

A young party girl finds herself lost in the woods and is confronted by a hoody who wants to frighten her with stories of the Suicide Forest.
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    1. Singularity

      The logline sets up a situation for a plot, but fails to follow through with presenting a plot.
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      Who is protagonist, the party girl or the hoody? ?And what is the protagonist’s objective goal? ?What’s the obstacle and/or antagonist who stands in the way of that goal? And what’s at stake?

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