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A young princess sheltering in a strange desert, after her father is slain and throne taken by a rival kingdom, discovers her exiled genie mother who mentors her quest to exact revenge and vanquish the usurper, dooming her as Arabia?s first maiden ruler.

A young princess sheltering in a strange desert, after her father is slain and throne taken by a rival kingdom, discovers her exiled genie mother who mentors her quest to exact revenge and vanquish the usurper, dooming her as Arabia?s first maiden ruler.
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    1. Uberwriter

      Recluse,

      You are trying to pack way too much into 1 sentence. Try stripping the adjectives and then bring this down to it’s story essence.

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    2. Singularity

      What foxtrot25 said.? An Arabian? princess must overthrow a usurper and assert her claim as the sole and rightful heir to her father’s throne.

      Somehow.

      Despite the fact that in the male-only, patriarchal milieu of Arabian politics, it’s inconceivable for a women to inherit anything or rule anyone.? But if you’ve got it figured out how the guys would accept a female ruler, more power to you.

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