Logliner
Posted: 2020-04-21T02:09:18+10:00 In:

A young team of investors are renovating some rundown rowhouses, and soon realize the neighborhood has a very dark history.

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    1. Singularity

      Who is the lead character?

      How does the dark history affect the lead character?

      When the lead character discovers the dark history, what is the lead character’s goal?

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    2. Singularity

      …and then what happens?

      Film is a visual medium, so think visually. What, specifically, do they find that leads them to discover the neighbourhood’s dark history?

      As Richiev has said, who is the lead character? Most teams in a movie have a leader or focus – Danny in Ocean’s 11, Mikey in The Goonies, Gordy in Stand By Me.

      Also as Richiev said, what is there goal once they have discovered this history? Currently, this logline only takes us up to the inciting incident. ?So then what happens?

       

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    3. Samurai

      Sounds interesting but please check out this logline write-up by Richiev via (Home page > click Votes) to help remedy all the questions this has generated.

      On Loglines: There are certain answers to logline problems that many of us seem to repeat as we give advice.

      After reading ? rewrite and post. We get this will not be your final logline version, the goal is to present your logline in a way the community can help.

      No, I am not sponsored by Richiev ? ? it?s just good stuff.

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