A young wife seeks revenge after catching her husband cheating, and with the help of her eccentric friends, creates an online business that names and shames unfaithful men.
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A young wife seeks revenge after catching her husband cheating, and with the help of her eccentric friends, creates an online business that names and shames unfaithful men.
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“But then…” What is the main conflict after that? What happens after the business is established? Do they get death threats? Do they uncover the USA President as an adulterer?
What must they do? What is the main ACTION?
Also (you don’t have to put it in the logline) think about the inner journey: she starts as bitter and vengeful. Does she end up as forgiving? As independent? Does she find somebody else? Doesn’t she also discover unfaithful women? Does her business protect those? Does she have a moral dilemma over this? (I’m riffing, here.)
Agree with giannisggeorgiou. What is the goal? They want to name and shame unfaithful men but to what end?
Is there a better way to describe the protagonist other than just “young wife”. Using the words “her husband” already gives us that the wife bit and “young” doesn’t hold much bearing on the story so in my mind you have two words where you can give us some more details. As?giannisggeorgiou pointed out, you could focus on her inner journey – her character arc.
Hope this helps.
Thanks all for your feedback.
I have written a synopsis that goes into depth about these questions, but it’s more about learning how to distill it in less than 60 words. These websites already exist, but the movie is really about the protagonist gaining confidence and new friendships… The husband cheated with her best friend and as a result, her entire network of those close to her is lost. Her confidence is regained with the new friends and she does find a new love interest in the end …