A young woman, whose boxing brother has been violent towards her all her life, decides to finally overcome her inner fear and learn how to box so that she can defeat him once and for all.

It’s an interesting premise, but I suggest it may need some refinement.

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How is she going to learn? She’s going to need a teacher, right? And given the nature of coach-athlete relationship, doesn’t that mean the coach character will get a significant amount of screen time? Perhaps more than her brother? That an important relationship, bonds of mutual respect will develop out of what initially will be an odd couple relationship?

Shouldn’t the story and logline incorporate that relationship in her struggle?

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