So, I wrote down this logline for an exercise. I find the concept behind it intriguing, although its form doesn’t really satisfy me.
Any thought and/or suggestion is appreciated! 🙂
P.S.: for clarity purposes, the “son” I’m referring to is the actual protagonist’s child, come back from the future to try to change the past and prevent a global indicent.
Dig it! leaning towards:
“When awakened from a 30-year cryosleep, a space solder sets out to exact vengeance against the ruthless murderer of his wife – his son.”
Happy New Year!
I agree with Odie. Leave out the Knocked out part and it feels like it is headed in the right direction.