After a gang of gardners threaten to destroy the patch of forest he lives in, a nerdy ant must work with his insect rivals to build a 6ft tall robot to fend off the human menace and save their colonies.
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After a gang of gardners threaten to destroy the patch of forest he lives in, a nerdy ant must work with his insect rivals to build a 6ft tall robot to fend off the human menace and save their colonies.
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This version of the logline is much better than your previous attempt.
The term, “Gang of gardeners” is a bit clunky, you might consider going back to ‘landscaper’ or maybe?’greedy landscaper’ to give the antagonist a negative?trait.
However, overall this tells us what we need to know.
Using this attempt as a base; here would be a small re-write: (Hope this helps)
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“When a greedy landscaper threatens his patch of forest, a nerdy ant must enlist his insect rivals to build a 6ft tall robot to fend off the menace and save their colony.”
Agreed with Richiev, this reads mostly well.
I’ll only add that the inciting incident needs a bit more urgency than the perception of a threat – best you describe the event that made it clear their colony is in danger.
For example:
After a greedy landscaper destroys a nearby patch of forest, a nerdy ant must enlist his insect rivals to build a 6ft tall robot to fend off the menace and save their colony.