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Neer ShelterSingularity
Posted: June 29, 20202020-06-29T08:40:16+10:00 2020-06-29T08:40:16+10:00In: Comedy

After an actual demon possesses his wife during rehearsals for a stage version of The Exorcist, a spineless director must fight his demonic spouse to save the cast and crew.

After an actual demon possesses his wife during rehearsals for a stage version of The Exorcist, a spineless director must fight his demonic spouse to save the cast and crew.
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      dpg Singularity
      2020-06-30T01:27:47+10:00Added an answer on June 30, 2020 at 1:27 am

      Or:

      When a real demon possesses his wife during rehearsals for a stage version of The Exorcist, an atheistic director must learn how to conduct an exorcism in order to rescue her.
      (31 words)

      That is, play off the religious theme which is, after all, the central motif of the stage drama.

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      • Neer Shelter Singularity
        2020-07-12T12:05:10+10:00Replied to answer on July 12, 2020 at 12:05 pm

        Great suggestion, thanks for that.

        I was going for a coward needing to overcome his fears, but the theological angle could work too.

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        • saurin desai Penpusher
          2021-06-05T01:04:20+10:00Replied to answer on June 5, 2021 at 1:04 am

          When an actual demon possesses his wife during rehearsals for a stage version of The Exorcist, a faithless director must conduct an exorcism to save his wife, the cast, and himself.
          (31 words)

          I’ve tried to combine the two loglines (forgive me if I know not what I do 🙂

          ‘Faithless’ rang better in my ears. Also, by adding the cast and himself, I felt the stakes rise, for it could kill them too.

          Thank you.

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    2. savinh0 Samurai
      2020-07-04T01:30:20+10:00Added an answer on July 4, 2020 at 1:30 am

      I like both loglines (Neer and dpg). Two totally different story directions though.

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      • Neer Shelter Singularity
        2020-07-12T12:05:29+10:00Replied to answer on July 12, 2020 at 12:05 pm

        Thanks Savino.

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    3. Neer Shelter Singularity
      2020-06-29T08:44:29+10:00Added an answer on June 29, 2020 at 8:44 am

      This is a logline for a mockumentary (fake documentary) I’m currently writing – it’s aimed at being a contained horror-comedy.

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