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Roberto AltoLogliner
Posted: August 23, 20172017-08-23T23:36:54+10:00 2017-08-23T23:36:54+10:00In: Drama

After a twister transports a lonely Kansas farm girl to a magical land, she sets out on a dangerous journey to find a wizard with the powers to send her home.

After a twister transports a lonely Kansas farm girl to a magical land, she sets out on a dangerous journey to find a wizard with the powers to send her home.
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      dpg Singularity
      2017-08-25T22:59:25+10:00Added an answer on August 25, 2017 at 10:59 pm

      Yes she wants to return home — to the safety ?of the familiar. ?Oz is a more hostile, dangerous world than Kansas ?(tornadoes excepted). The “lesson learned” is that she comes to appreciate that home. ?She doesn’t just need to return to Kansas ?to be safe — she wants to return to Kansas to be with the people she loves.

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      DanielSturman Logliner
      2017-08-25T22:38:47+10:00Added an answer on August 25, 2017 at 10:38 pm

      There’s a motivation problem in Wizard of Oz. She wants to go home the moment from the moment she gets there, yet ‘theirs no place like home’ is the moral?

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      Neer Shelter Singularity
      2017-08-24T13:39:26+10:00Added an answer on August 24, 2017 at 1:39 pm

      Good logline. Perhaps would be best to mention the wicked witch of the west?

      After a tornado transports a Kansas girl to a magical land, she must defeat a wicked witch on her journey to find a wizard with the powers to send her home.

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      dpg Singularity
      2017-08-24T02:02:54+10:00Added an answer on August 24, 2017 at 2:02 am

      My favorite “twist” on the story premise.

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      Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
      2017-08-24T01:28:44+10:00Added an answer on August 24, 2017 at 1:28 am

      I don’t think back then they said twister much. Replace it with tornado, perhaps? She really isn’t that lonely, she has her dog, maybe work that in instead?

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