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pakers
Posted: July 12, 20122012-07-12T03:11:44+10:00 2012-07-12T03:11:44+10:00In: Public

After a young archeologist discovers an ancient tablet, a group of immortal assassins hunt him down. The Guardian stands in their way.

Action-Fantasy

just something that has been in my head for a little while

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    1. alain_alfaro
      2012-07-12T03:52:59+10:00Added an answer on July 12, 2012 at 3:52 am

      This reminds me of Indiana Jones or The Mummy. Could be lots of fun to watch, very worldy and historical too. I’m wondering, who is The Guardian? That part is a bit ambigous to me at the moment. But, good job, sounds like a lotta fun.

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    2. cinester
      2012-07-12T04:13:19+10:00Added an answer on July 12, 2012 at 4:13 am

      Pretty good, my only suggestion is even more description (Ex. ancient sumerian tablet) and fit in where it takes place as that will help paint a picture as well. Also, what’s the Guardian? Is he the protector of the ancient secrets?

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    3. pakers
      2012-07-12T08:09:28+10:00Added an answer on July 12, 2012 at 8:09 am

      The Guardian was once a member of the assassins (I don’t have a name for them yet). The story is that theses assassins were meant to keep the world pure, but they become power hungry and tried to destroy the world and recreate the way they wanted. The tablet is the way to achieve this. The Guardian saw this and hid the tablet where it remained hidden until Sam (the archeologist) found it. So The Guardian has to protect it.

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    4. pakers
      2012-07-12T08:12:32+10:00Added an answer on July 12, 2012 at 8:12 am

      Yeah, I should have done that. I just threw this up here to see if people thought it was interesting. I’m thinking desert locations and historic places like The Pyramids, etc.

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