Penpusher
Posted: 2021-09-07T00:00:56+10:00 In:

After being left home alone by accident over christmas, an eight year old boy must defend his house from a duo of incompetent burglars.

After being left home alone by accident over christmas, an eight year old boy must defend his house from a duo of incompetent burglars.
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    1. Penpusher

      Good job! I would maybe throw some of the words around in the beginning. “After accidentally being left behind over Christmas, a mischievous 8-year-old has to protect his family’s home from a duo of incompetent burglars.”

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    2. Samurai

      Use genre “Examples” to better orientate the reader.

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