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Alan SmitheePenpusher
Posted: October 20, 20202020-10-20T02:51:02+10:00 2020-10-20T02:51:02+10:00In: Adventure

After being permanently transformed into a penguin during an operation, a disgraced MI6 agent is offered redemption to spy on a villainous family by acting as their daughter’s newest adorable pet.

After being permanently transformed into a penguin during an operation, a disgraced MI6 agent is offered redemption to spy on a villainous family by acting as their daughter’s newest adorable pet.
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    1. SSalvatore Logliner
      2020-10-22T11:46:07+10:00Added an answer on October 22, 2020 at 11:46 am

      Love it. I actually laughed out loud.

      I think you could tighten it up on the back-end. Flesh out the villainous family. Maybe they are crime lords / drug dealers who use animal rights activism (or the world’s largest online pet store) as a front. Tie the villains to some seemingly legitimate use of animals.

      Maybe their “villainous” streak is that they own a fishing fleet that uses driftnet fishing and actually kills mass numbers of penguins in their fishing boats’ nets.

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    2. Odie Samurai
      2020-10-25T02:49:53+10:00Added an answer on October 25, 2020 at 2:49 am

      I dig the idea of the penguin being the daughter’s new pet.
      Focusing on the front-end, how does a disgraced 007 get transformed into a penguin?
      EX: “When a bungled mission transforms him into a penguin, a disgraced MI6 agent…”
      Opinion: Can “permanent” be removed? Meaning, can this villainous family have the antidote to turn him back into a dad/agent?

      Take care.

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