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dpgSingularity
Posted: February 19, 20162016-02-19T04:16:47+10:00 2016-02-19T04:16:47+10:00In: Examples

After being transported to a surreal world where she accidently kills the first person she meets, a young girl must team up with three strangers to kill again in order to get back home. (The Wizard of Oz)

After being transported to a surreal world where she accidently kills the first person she meets, a young girl must team up with three strangers to kill again in order to get back home. (The Wizard of Oz)
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    1. Neer Shelter Singularity
      2016-02-20T10:31:06+10:00Added an answer on February 20, 2016 at 10:31 am

      Gees it sounds far more violent than I remembered it.

      I think “…transported…” sounds as if it is part of an itinerary as appose to an out of the ordinary event, perhaps caught in a tornado would be better.

      After she is caught in a tornado a farm girl is thrown into a magical land but kills a witch on her arrival, she must now travel far to find a wizard to ask for help before the dead witch’s sister catches her.

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    2. Tony Edward Samurai
      2016-02-20T12:24:56+10:00Added an answer on February 20, 2016 at 12:24 pm
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    3. Tony Edward Samurai
      2016-02-20T12:35:43+10:00Added an answer on February 20, 2016 at 12:35 pm

      Sorry — the above post didn’t…post….

      I agree with Nir – it read’s like (another) reboot (and I’m seeing a poster starring Angelina Jolie with a Rambo-like head-band, arm over the shoulders of a faceless scarecrow and a terminator like Cyborg/ ruby encrusted M16 slung over her shoulder… 😉 )

      After having a play I found it quite tricky to get ?concise coverage in the constrains of a 30 word logline. Below is my take, trying to keep it as basic as possible:

      “Transported to the magical world of ?Oz? a Kansas farm girl must deliver the broom stick of a wicked witch to the ?Wizard of Oz? in exchange for passage back home.”

      Still NQR tough…

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    4. Tony Edward Samurai
      2016-02-20T12:37:43+10:00Added an answer on February 20, 2016 at 12:37 pm

      “Still NQR tough” = “Still NQR (Not Quite Right) though“

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    5. Tony Edward Samurai
      2016-02-20T14:37:27+10:00Added an answer on February 20, 2016 at 2:37 pm

      Sorry dpg — I missed the gag… just saw your link… 😉

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    6. Richiev Singularity
      2016-02-20T16:46:12+10:00Added an answer on February 20, 2016 at 4:46 pm

      I kinda thought the logline was funny 🙂

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    7. Interempty Logliner
      2016-04-27T11:27:19+10:00Added an answer on April 27, 2016 at 11:27 am

      just awesome

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