Evil Intentions – any better?
Alan SmitheePenpusher
After five years of wrongful imprisonment in the Space Justice Federations (SJF) penal colony, Instead of walking free and into the arms of his wife, ex SJF cop Taylor must outwit a malfunctioning, psychotic, shape shifting android that is using prisoners to re-enact macabre scenes from old horror movies to gain his freedom. 2. On the day of his discharge, after serving five years wrongful imprisonment by the Space Justice Federation (SJF), SJF cop Taylor should be a free man. Instead of walking into the waiting arms of his wife,Taylor finds a malfunctioning, psychotic, shape shifting android that is using prisoners to re-enact macabre scenes from old horror movies stands between him and this reunion .
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this is a synopsis, not a logline. Logline’s say all of that in one or two sentences 🙂
sorry, I reread and saw what you did….that said, I know you can make this more impactful by making it more lean.
After wrongful imprisonment a now free man is still being kept from his family by a shapeshifting droid who uses people for his personal pleasure… (ha ha…you know what I’m saying?)