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BLouisPenpusher
Posted: January 28, 20172017-01-28T08:38:11+10:00 2017-01-28T08:38:11+10:00In: Comedy

After forgetting to bring Vegemite a group of tourists in the Australian bush land are set upon by carnivorous drop bears and must find a way to survive.

After forgetting to bring Vegemite a group of tourists in the Australian bush land are set upon by carnivorous drop bears and must find a way to survive.
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    1. Neer Shelter Singularity
      2017-01-28T10:55:49+10:00Added an answer on January 28, 2017 at 10:55 am

      In my optimism, I choose to read this as a genuine post…
      Hoping it is;

      The events seem disconnected from each other – how can the lack of vegemite bring about a vicious Koala attack?? And by vicious, I mean cute and furry…

      Also, is there one main character you could specify instead of a group made up of an arbitrary number of characters?

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    2. dpg Singularity
      2017-01-28T13:48:51+10:00Added an answer on January 28, 2017 at 1:48 pm

      I can see this as a comedy sketch, a short film. ?But as a full length feature film?

      Have you been able to plot enough twist and turns to flesh out a feature length film? ?Or is it only intended as a short?

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    3. Richiev Singularity
      2017-01-28T18:17:40+10:00Added an answer on January 28, 2017 at 6:17 pm

      Is there a lead character? If so, what do they want?

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    4. CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
      2017-01-30T15:19:50+10:00Added an answer on January 30, 2017 at 3:19 pm

      I am an Aussie and this can’t be a real post. Possibly a hangover from Australia Day.

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