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Nicholas Andrew HallsSamurai
Posted: February 17, 20132013-02-17T21:07:46+10:00 2013-02-17T21:07:46+10:00In: Public

After his assistant refuses his come ons, a conceited inventor switches bodies with a more appealing stranger. But when his plan to seduce her fails again and the stranger flees the country, the inventor must race against time to reverse the switch or face the rest of his life living someone else's.

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    1. mmckean
      2013-02-18T04:44:12+10:00Added an answer on February 18, 2013 at 4:44 am

      This is another cool idea…could be quite funny but it could also be made into a thriller or horror movie if done correctly. Maybe instead of ‘come ons’ you could say ‘advances’? Im not sure if conceited is the right word to describe the inventor either….Ill have to think of another one, ill get back to you. Also, why would the inventor want to switch back? He is in the body of an appealing stranger. That sounds pretty cool, actually. Unless maybe the girl decided she really had a thing for the inventor all along haha. Then he would have to get his body back so he could be with her haha

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    2. Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
      2013-02-19T14:58:50+10:00Added an answer on February 19, 2013 at 2:58 pm

      Thanks mate. I thought about “advances” originally – but as he is her employer as well, I worried it would get misconstrued and the romantic / sexual nature of it would be unclear. It’s possible that the following sentence gives it context … but I wanted there to be no confusion.

      Totally right about needing a clear and concise reason to need to get back into his own body. I’ll try again.

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