After his brother’s aircraft carrier is destroyed by a mysterious dirigible in the closing days of WW2, a conceited fighter-pilot leads a squadron of misfits to intercept the craft before it reaches its next target: London.
Nicholas Andrew HallsSamurai
After his brother’s aircraft carrier is destroyed by a mysterious dirigible in the closing days of WW2, a conceited fighter-pilot leads a squadron of misfits to intercept the craft before it reaches its next target: London.
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The particulars of the weapon or vehicle that killed his brother can be cut from the logline – the plot is about the MC seeking revenge and preventing others from diening.? What made this interesting, for me anyhow, was that he leads a squadron of misfits -? his challenge is two-fold stop the killing aircraft, and control a bunch of loose cannons.
Why not imbue the aircraft’s description with mystery, and leave the details for the synopsis.
My try:
After his brother’s ship was drowned by a mysterious aircraft in WW2, a conceited fighter-pilot must lead a squadron of missfits to intercept the aircraft before it reaches London.
A dirigible in World War II? ? In the closing days when by that time the Allies had complete mastery of the air space on the Western front? ?How historically credible is that?
Is this is a hybrid action-fantasy that requires the audience to suspend disbelief that it could have actually happened? ?Or an action movie that can pass with the appearance of historical similitude ?– ?it could have happened?