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Alan SmitheePenpusher
Posted: September 23, 20222022-09-23T14:19:22+10:00 2022-09-23T14:19:22+10:00In: Action

After revealing her powers to herself and the world, a promising lawyer is forced to join a hero agency to control her abilities and regain her freedom. Meanwhile, after a new law approval, a retired hero turns against the society that abandoned him

After revealing her powers to herself and the world, a promising lawyer is forced to join a hero agency to control her abilities and regain her freedom. Meanwhile, after a new law approval, a retired hero turns against the society that abandoned him
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    1. BenGilani Logliner
      2022-09-24T19:33:29+10:00Added an answer on September 24, 2022 at 7:33 pm

      Hi Julio Torres,

      Here’s what I understood reading your logline:

      “To harness her superhuman powers, a successful attorney turns to a superhero society, while a retired superhero takes advantage (How?) of a new law (What law?) and turns against the society he believes banished him.”

      Use the above logline as a template and rewrite it if you think I got it right.

      Good Luck

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