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Alan SmitheePenpusher
Posted: April 26, 20212021-04-26T19:05:58+10:00 2021-04-26T19:05:58+10:00In: Comedy

After robbing a casino in Vegas, A pair of prodigal biracial twin arrive in New York to start a new life but the trouble they lelf in Vegas didn’t stay in Vegas

After robbing a casino in Vegas, A pair of prodigal biracial twin arrive in New York to start a new life but the trouble they lelf in Vegas didn’t stay in Vegas
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    1. The_CNI Samurai
      2021-05-04T10:10:26+10:00Added an answer on May 4, 2021 at 10:10 am

      There’s no need to include that these twins are Biracial (not that they can’t be Biracial, you can make them what you want) and I don’t understand what is meant by them being “Prodigal”. Nothing really tells me anything about these characters in the end of the day.

      All in all, it’s about 2 robbers who find that they’ve pissed off the law or someone else they shouldn’t have after committing a crime. I don’t see anything in that premise that stands out.

      Is there any unique twist in the idea?

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      2021-04-28T11:32:00+10:00Added an answer on April 28, 2021 at 11:32 am

      Actually pretty darn good — I’m intrigued!

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