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Alan SmitheePenpusher
Posted: August 7, 20132013-08-07T21:49:00+10:00 2013-08-07T21:49:00+10:00In: Public

After the boyfriend lost his memory because of a brain surgery,the girlfriend must pretend to get know the boy again for keep their relationship.

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    1. Marcus Hyndes
      2013-08-07T22:18:25+10:00Added an answer on August 7, 2013 at 10:18 pm

      Hey Weize, I like your logline. It sets up for an interesting story. I can only suggest a couple of minor changes: After a young man lost his memory because of brain surgery, (name), his girl friend, must pretend to know him in the hope of keeping their relationship.

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    2. Marcus Hyndes
      2013-08-08T08:55:33+10:00Added an answer on August 8, 2013 at 8:55 am

      Good logline Weize, it’s got all the makings of an intriguing story. Maybe you could introduce the boyfriend as ‘a young man’ and the girlfriends name eg. , Joanne, his girlfriend….
      Cheers

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    3. 2013-09-18T19:30:02+10:00Added an answer on September 18, 2013 at 7:30 pm

      This logline is very promising and it will be most interesting to see how the writer will turn it into a worthwhile script. Good Luck!!!

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