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N.J.RobinsPenpusher
Posted: October 8, 20212021-10-08T10:02:38+10:00 2021-10-08T10:02:38+10:00In: Crime

After The murder of there friend, a group of inner-city teens vows revenge by killing every cop in California.

After The murder of there friend, a group of inner-city teens vows revenge by killing every cop in California.
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    1. Richiev Singularity
      2021-10-08T14:02:04+10:00Added an answer on October 8, 2021 at 2:02 pm

      What compels the reader to want the lead characters to succeed?

      I could see if the leads went after the specific police officer but to kill every cop in California, both men, and women, Black, Asian, White, young, old, even those who have dedicated their lives to helping others?

      At some point won’t people tune out?

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    2. JohnAlen2025 Penpusher
      2021-10-09T03:54:23+10:00Added an answer on October 9, 2021 at 3:54 am

      Killing every cop in California would be a major undertaking. My first thought is that a group of inner-city teens could never pull it off no matter how badly they want revenge. The premise as it’s presented here is therefore flawed.

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    3. mobiuswest Penpusher
      2021-10-14T13:03:41+10:00Added an answer on October 14, 2021 at 1:03 pm

      I’d watch that!

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