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Scott DanzigSamurai
Posted: September 25, 20192019-09-25T00:52:31+10:00 2019-09-25T00:52:31+10:00In: SciFi

After two job-seeking programmers accidentally install a greedy biotech corporation’s experimental software update to reality itself, they must exploit the resulting bugs to evade capture and fix the world.

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    1. Mike Pedley Singularity
      2019-09-25T01:07:55+10:00Added an answer on September 25, 2019 at 1:07 am

      I have lots of questions.

      How exactly do they accidentally install a software update to reality?? Reality is just that. Real. Unless it’s all a computer programme a la The Matrix. If that’s the case then we kinda need that info as part of the set up. Even then though, surely that would be pretty heavily guarded… not like you’re just gonna find a random USB port that two random job-seekers can accidentally access. I simply can’t get my head around this. I think it either needs further clarification or a rethink.

      What does the experimental software do? This is fundamental to understanding the plot. Without this, we have no idea how they can use it to their benefit and ultimately “fix the world”. When you say “fix the world” do you mean “correct the mistake they made by installing the software” or “make the world a better place”?

       

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    2. Scott Danzig Samurai
      2019-09-25T01:45:08+10:00Added an answer on September 25, 2019 at 1:45 am

      Mike Pedley …thanks for the comments… I always find suggestions here to be more and more explicit about things, and find the resulting loglines to be rather unwieldy.? Maybe this?

      In a world that few have realized is a computer simulation, a mischievous programmer naively installs a greedy corporation’s experimental software update to their reality, and now must exploit the resulting bugs to evade capture and undo her mistake.

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